literature

why cry for the dead?

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There’s one.
                       There’s two.
                                                There’s three.
                                                                        There’s four.
                                                                                               Wait.
What are we talking about?
One.
          Two.
                    Three.
                                Four.
                                              Let’s dance.
                                              Let’s groove.
                                              Let’s move
                                                                    to the...
                                                                                  Wait.
What are we talking about again?
One.
           Two.
                      Three.
                                   Four.
                                                I’m listening now.
                                                I’m wondering now.
                                                I’m waiting now
                                                                                  for the...
                                                                                                Wait.
Who are you?
One.
            Two.
                       Three.
                                    Four.
                                               Why are you knocking?
                                               Why are you testing?
                                               What are you waiting f-
                                                                                          Wait.
Where am I?
Let’s count again.
                        One.
                                   Two.
                                              Three.
                                                           Four.
                                                                       I can’t count anymore.
                                                                        I can’t help anyone
                                                                        I can’t be worth
                                                                                                  any-
                                                                                                            Before I continue...
What’s going on again?
One.
            Two.
                       Three.
                                     Four.
                                                  Capsules and  Cancer.
                                                                                     20 different kinds.
                             Ice cream and Insomnia.
                                                                 20 different flavors.
Friends and Family.
                              20 at a funeral.

How long again?
One.
           Two.
                     Three.
                                  Four.

                                                         Let’s Celebrate.
                                       
I'm not sure about this one. Some thoughts of reassurment on the counting thing (hopefully it doesn't get too repetitive and annoying...tell if it does), and some general thoughts as the whole. Hopefully you get what's going on after two reads, and if not i'll screw around with it a bit. Tell if you don't after two though, and tell if you do.

Also, I was wondering if anyone knew how to make font smaller in a deviation, because there is something I really want to add, but only will if I can make it small...
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Princess-Jenna's avatar
Opps, I mean:
Love it, love the whole numbers thing, makes it very interestiong!:nod: